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Let me runaway

I wanna runaway
But just for one day

I wanna be alone
I dont need a phone

Dont look for me
Just let me go

I know you hate me any way
I just want us to be ok

But we cant we never can
Repair this damage we began

Its not just me
Its not just you
I just wish we were really true

People only see what they want to see
They think that im pretty much free

I hate this world
I feel like im being twirled

Just let me runaway
Please just for one day

Author notes

This is something I feel.Please tell me what you think.You dont have to hold back I wont get mad...

A contest entry

What do u think???

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 10
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    thank you for entering

    I really like this piece and it has a lot of emotion, wanting to runnaway is not something new to me and this write is amazing, brilliant job. Good luck and thanks for entering!
    -penguin-

  • bballer21
    November 3

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    i really loved this poem. I love rhyming, and you brought that to the table, so i give you props! but it has tons of emotion in it. fantastc job, keep on continuing to write!