A dragon called Peter went flying,
By accident, he wasn't trying.
He slipped on a skateboard
Then he and a mate soared
He sneezed and they both started frying!
A contest entry
- Monster Limericks!! Contest by refinnej.
550 points, ended November 10, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me honestly what you think, good or bad.
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
... that's the only trouble when dragons sneeze ... disaster!!
All the best in the contest.
Sue
x
-
This is very funny.
-
LMAO
yea im laughing.
Poor mate shouldnt of went flying
and they wouldnt ended up frying
Even though Ol Peter was trying
they both ended up dying
Good luck in the contest,
Love,
Tory
-
NIce one
-
oh cute! my son loves dragons!!
-
This is very clever. Great match to theme.
-
Those poor little dragons! Maybe next time they'll learn to take fire extinguishers with them till they've accomplished flying and frying at the same time!
-
-
The aim is very much NOT to fry as you fly!!!
-
-
I peeked at the contest a few minutes ago, and I figured there would be some fun entries. This one definitely falls into that category. Fun, whimsical, and just an enjoyable read.
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
