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the melosy i thought i knew

i though i knew the melody that you were singing
but then i turned the other way and found that i was wrong
now when i think of you i think of
what i could have done with my life
but instead i am gone for good
i couldn't take the pain you left inside me
why must you be this way everytime something happens
now i know that everything you ever talked to me about was a lie
so you blew what we had all sky high
when you lied
that is why i died

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  • Syko Path
    November 4
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    i love the last 2 lines!