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Tender Mercies: for CarolDesjarlais

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How does one

arch against an ache

that steals the breadth of sky? 

 

What may we offer

to alleviate such sweet agony

as loss of love demands? 

 

There are few more wicked wounds

we will know than to be absent

from such gifts as the sanctuaries we've known

within a mother's womb, a mother's heart,

a mother's tender solace. 

 

We will bear sorrow, as we must, somehow.

 

There is wisdom to be gained from these tragic emptinesses

which her beauty has pulled from beneath your depths;

there are lessons here, if you can bear them. 

 

I know the paths leading to - and from -

this chaotic crevasse.

 

My heart will carry yours across these swirling waters

until you are safe upon another, far more gentle shore.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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For my beloved Sister, who loves so deeply and so well.  

Let others now hold you close in your grief as you have done 

for so many, Dear Heart. You and yours are in our thoughts and prayers.

There's one bit of wisdom I have learned through such sorrow:

we cannot truly lose what we have already gained.

May your well-loved mother rest in peace, my Forever Friend. She's earned it.  

 

 

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  • simone waters
    November 15

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    You words are such a comfort, Wanda. Not only to Carol, during this time of wan shadow and sorrow, but all who come to drink from your wise pen.

    "...There are few more wicked wounds
    we will know than to be absent
    from such gifts as the sanctuaries we've known
    within a mother's womb, a mother's heart,
    a mother's tender solace..."

    Yes. Without this we struggle so much harder to find that one safe place to lie down our cares - to know simple peace. For it is from that indelible umbilicus felt, that we are fed the sense of belonging... to another, to the world, to each other, to the flesh we've inherited....a child reaching out through time ever with curious fingers to learn what is safe, what will burn if touched...forever listening to unspoken whispers from that womb.

    nod... you provide a safe place in your gentle observations for those who may need a surrogate womb to listen to. I hope you realize that, Scribe

    Carol is a lucky woman to have your utter confidences...

    I am so very proud of you both - for being who you are present and loving with any trial or tribulation. Glorious fully attenuated, Grace-filled Women..

    Congratulations on the recognition given this beautiful penning...


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 15

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    These three years have been a great gift to both her and me...what love was gathered to that hem of hers, what lap her children were able to crawl upon...a grief with no regrets - how beautiful it has been.


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    November 7

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    i know how much Carol has meant to you in the past and how much she means to you now. i know she has shared her heart with yours with elegance.

    good luck in the contest.



  • klassy lassy
    November 6

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    As you always do, your tender spirit shines in the embrace you wrap around Carol. We can not take another's steps, but I can't think of anything more comforting than to know a soul sister is holding the light and walking with us when the night requires a candle and the wellspring is filling tears. Love, Karen


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 5

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    Beautiful and so touching for such a dear lady in her time of loss...I am sure that this touches her deeply ...As always, you give such a gift of heart

    Lynda


  • just mercedes gold member
    November 3

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    Beautifully written from your heart. I hope and trust Carol finds comfort here.

  • Virulent Malice
    November 3

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    Picked up steam towards the end and ends perfectly with a powerfully penned couplet, italicized for importance, but even without the italics it'd remain hard-hitting and poignant.


  • Desire gold member
    November 3

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    Precious~

    This is a Gem for a Gem Sweet Soul
    and Love the Message also the Energy You have delivered
    which touches deep to core~
    What a Beautiful Dedication and exchange of Love~
    that cannot be measured
    Love this!~~~
    How I learn from You...
    Keep that quill dancing Precious Spirit
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in the contest~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • michael thomas gold member
    November 3

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    Wanda you are a person of mercies. Carol loses her mother. We all lose a mother in remembrance of ours.

    michael


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 3
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    Ty, my dearest friend.
    You know, we all were given a chance to talk to her as she lay dying. My sister, who is just two years older than me told mother, on the phone, "Mother, I have told God to make tea for you and when he asks you to do your accounting, to be kind!" Omg, that sent me into puddles of pain, it is so beautiful. I just told her to know I loved her and had forgiven her forever ago! That was her biggest worry when they found me - what my residual feelings were - see, she did not know me.

    ty for this poem..every bit of comfort I can gain now, I must.


    • Night Hope gold member
      November 3
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      You're so welcome, Carol. God, that IS beautiful. Such a tender memory for all of you to hold, and take comfort from.


  • kaibab silver member
    November 3

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    Such is wind from prairie page,
    ceremonial sage to Maine's beloved coast,
    waves thrasking rock to carve in host
    her shared bread broken, for love to swallow.

    lovely...

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