Sometimes I feel like,
I will break
Sometimes I feel like,
There's nothing to make,
Of this situation that I'm in
I'm six feet under
I'm drowning
Chorus:
And I'm ready to break
Free from all these chains
They hold me down in pain
I want to feel alive
Let lose, I'm free inside
But the monster is calling
I'm not ready to fight
Sometimes I feel like,
I won't stay alive
Sometimes I feel like,
There's no place to hide
From the scearms inside my head
( they're killing me again)
Chorus:
And I'm ready to break
Free from all these chains
They hold me down in pain
I want to feel alive
Let lose, I'm free inside
But the monster is calling
I'm not ready to fight
Bridge:
Look how far we've come
Only to lose everything
If we give up now we're only memories
Chorus2:
So I'll fight and try
To beat what's inside
This pain it won't
Defeat me in my own mind
Look out now
I'm ready to fight!!
A contest entry
- Lyrics. by ladybug..
600 points, ended November 21, 12 entries
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Comments
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I realy like it.
Well done.
I enjoyed reading it.
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Graphically intails a demeanor of struggle, this desire to champion is releaving at ever through the song's repitition. oOo I wish I could the rythms and instruments you've thought up for this. Great write!


