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This monster

Sometimes I feel like,
I will break
Sometimes I feel like,
There's nothing to make,
Of this situation that I'm in
I'm six feet under
I'm drowning

Chorus:

And I'm ready to break
Free from all these chains
They hold me down in pain
I want to feel alive
Let lose, I'm free inside
But the monster is calling
I'm not ready to fight


Sometimes I feel like,
I won't stay alive
Sometimes I feel like,
There's no place to hide
From the scearms inside my head
( they're killing me again)

Chorus:

And I'm ready to break
Free from all these chains
They hold me down in pain
I want to feel alive
Let lose, I'm free inside
But the monster is calling
I'm not ready to fight

Bridge:

Look how far we've come
Only to lose everything
If we give up now we're only memories


Chorus2:

So I'll fight and try
To beat what's inside
This pain it won't
Defeat me in my own mind
Look out now
I'm ready to fight!!

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  • Tulie
    November 11
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    I realy like it.
    Well done.
    I enjoyed reading it.


  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 5

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    Graphically intails a demeanor of struggle, this desire to champion is releaving at ever through the song's repitition. oOo I wish I could the rythms and instruments you've thought up for this. Great write!