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Release

I unzip my skin to release the red,
with it, my pain.
"Pathetic." I point out to myself.
I was pathetic.
I had no life,
no meaning,
no joy;

and I never will.

Author notes

A good poet doesn't always write in thier own shoes...
A little poem about something I hear entirely too much about.

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  • Sweet-Pea7
    November 3

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    So, this is pretty but depressing. Your author's note is pretty much saying that you don't do this, right?