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unspoken love

Missing image

Twist of fate

oh to late

can one ever

relate to deep love

that is so displaced?

cherished emotions

deep devotion to

their mate, chalked up

to deaths door slammed

in the others face...

Grace of God,was indeed

another day of fate as

one who was left behind died

leaving skeletal remains to

be found as the sun risen

to be another sad but blissful day.

 

Author notes

this is meant to be free verse...

A contest entry

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  • The kiss is Thirst gold member
    November 8
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    Thought provoking. I very much enjoyed reading this. Thankyou.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    November 4

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    excellent

    Enjoyed the read sweetie
    Love the vivid imagery as well
    Best of luck in the contest
    This is a winner in mine
    I just posted a new one hope you come read mine
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 4

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    Great write! You did an excellent job withthe prompt and you did wonderful on the free write. Keep up the great writing and good luck in this contest hun!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    November 4
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    Excellent take on Bill's Prompt---A deep, profound and enjoyable read!
    Very well penned and best of luck in the contest!


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    November 3

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    Simply beautiful and I really love the lines

    leaving skeletal remains to

    be found as the sun risen

    to be another sad but blissful day.

    what a great finsh to a beautiful poem, much luck to you in the contest and have a beautiful night xoxo

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