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Soul Full Of Butterflies

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Under each stone  trapped butterflies can be found
And if you free the butterflies
You shall here the sound of
Some thing so graceful never heard around
The songs of beauty and of the free air
Yet though trapped under there
They still sing of how once a day
They were able to fly their own way
So under this stone of life and tears
Some lonely butterflies forgotten this year
So whom shall be the lucky ones to see
These once trapped butterflies
Once again freely sing
The song of freedom
The song of me
The soul of butterflies

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  • silver-girl
    November 5
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    I like butterflies--soft, fragile, delicate, so very pretty! What a nice piece here!!!


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 3

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    "Once again freely sing
    The song of freedom
    The song of me
    The soul of butterflies"
    these words alone are breath-takingly beautiful..the entire write is stunning..your title contest really sparked your beautiful butterfly muse and heart..thank you so much for sharing..much love..*huggles..David


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 3

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    Having a giant butterfly tattooed between my breasts resting over my heart, I can relate to this a bit. I love their freedom and beauty. Such a lovely piece. Great read dear friend. ~gypsy~


  • John BoSox
    November 3

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    This is truly beautiful..lovely your emotions come through so well..Your talent is priceless..Thank you for writing this,,congrats


    jOHN


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 3

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    i love the title of the this piece.... so carefree!
    love, becca


  • glenn shannon silver member
    November 3

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    OH BEAUTIFUL this is lovely Mandi and you are such a butterfly very nive hun love alwats glennxo


    • Jade.Butterfly gold member
      November 3
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      Awe thank you darling!
      I'm glad you liked this.
      It's the love for butterflies that possesses me to write these!
      Love ya too

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