I have fallen in love with his voice,
his masculine smell,
his firm hands around my waist.
But I cannot express in words
my love for him in any verbal tone.
I find the only way to convey
a love so ardent as mine
is to set a factory or warehouse ablaze,
and stand back and adore the fire.
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Vote for me dammit!
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Donwright scary in here!
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..what complicated state of being..a nurturer and destroyer at the same time..though some smart guy once said that nothing is ever really created or destroyed..just changed from one form to another..mhmmm.
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I know where your coming from. I like things flame broiled myself.
This is a lovely poem and I wish I could give you some clappies but I poured everything I had into my reelection campaign fund but I lost to the Hamburgler. He's a crook. -
You sick. No way you are getting a trophy. You just torch it and sell it for money to buy matches! Nice hair by the way, what is your name again? Jenny? Jenny on Fire?
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PyroMom, you sound truly maniacal,
the result of being pent up too long.
May your words soon be released
so you can set hearts on fire,
metaphorically.
You are one scary character!!!
A credit to Dr. Yemenstein!
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You may not have the best taste in music but you make up for it with Moxie
A good poem, rich with ... ummm... emotion
Be careful with the gasoline, though, I've heard those warehouses can get totally out of control if the arsonist isn't careful.
Dee
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this really warms the soul...lol
re: AN "Vote for me dammit!"
How can I refuse that.haha Thanks for showing up for the contest.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1fDpHSecAio
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Oh my that is a chaotic song. Much like my mind is when I have to be downtown to torch an abandoned building at two, but back home to cook the family dinner by five.
Thank you for voting for me. I will read your entry when Yem stops making believe he is a PyroMom.
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I can't figure out which prompt you're writing for but you obviously love your man.
Nice work.
Is that smoke I smell?
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Prompts: 4 17 18 23 32 And I'm sure I could stretch a few others.
That's just my apron, I didn''t have time to remove it before my last outing downtown. -
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I just wrote my poem and only used one prompt. You are a super duper poet to be able to incorporate all those prompts into 9 lines. You're my new idol. Pass the blow torch.
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LOL, now if I were voting you'd surely get mine!
You should burn divorce lawyers offices though, that is showing love
But I don't vote, I even don't vote in political elections, it's against my religion
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Sometimes emotions are difficult to process. I can understand why you turn to fire to express yourself. Is your husband a fireman? You must really shoot sparks when he comes home from work.
This is a very honest and heartfelt write. Good luck in the contest.
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David? He sells matchbooks door-to-door. I get free samples!
Thanks for voting for me as I am sure you will because we are such good new buds!
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