By now I should have been broken,
On the rocks that rise from life's ocean,
Just another ship lost at sea,
By now I should have been scattered,
In the wind of my lonesome travels,
Like a thousand dandelion seeds,
And I should have come unraveled,
At the seams like a well worn sweater,
But you hold me together.
My hopes should have been shattered,
Like a bottle out behind some tavern,
From a fight that you had no chaance to win,
My dreams should have been ashes,
Gone up in smoke like a book of matches,
Tossed away never gonna burn again,
And I should have worn right through,
Like old cowboy's biit leather,
But you hold me together.
I feel your love surrounding me,
Strong enough that I can believe,
There won't ever be a storm that I can't weather,
Because you hold me together.
Together,
Yeah,
Yeah,
I feel your love surrounding me,
Strong enough that I can believe,
There won't ever be a storm that I can't weather,
No there will never be a storm that I can't weather.
I should have been long forgotten,
Just a footnote at the bottom,
Of a page in a book of what could've beens,
My heart should lie in pieces,
On the ground like a goodbye letter,
But you hold me together,
You hold me together,
Yeah,
Yeah,
You hold me together,
Together,
Yeah,
Yeah,
Oh,
You hold me,
You hold me together.
A contest entry
- (For my favorites and friends only sorry)It's about love,friendship and family by Daughter Of Night.
550 points, ended November 11, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Freewrite Song Lyrics I wrote for my new Boyfriend!! I also entered them in a conetest! Wish me luck!
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Great write, you must be so lucky to have someone in your life to hold you that close that you dont break. I really enjoy this song!!
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Beautiful Song Daniel simply Beautiful I love every bit of it...I can hear the guitar now
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Good Song lyrics
flowed well and i could imagine the vocals of the woman singing this song. Quite a powerful emotional piece! I really liked the subject content, imagery, and all together the poem itself! Great write. The title walks great in to the first line of the poem, and is also the last line of the poem. Everything seems to be running on a tempo, and doesn't need much editing. Great job@
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Awe baby this is awesome. It is so sweet hmm is it about me Idk . Well I miss you and I hope everything is going okay
you 
Searra
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White rose wolf
oh my god this is so freakin awsome i love it i really i wonder if its about me lol j/k but really liked it, it ryhmed and showed that person can keep you together yeah yeah lol . good in my contest
sincerly,
angel
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