stranger you do not know
how i look upon on you
you must be the one
iam looking for
somewhere , some far
i have surely spent life time with you
it all recalls by the colour of my love
shaded blue , soft red and rosy red
that matches your lips
i have surely been in your arms before
doubt i erased with the way
you love to touch me
painting the rain
softly tapping the window
of our love
you grew with me
you kissed me every moment
our
bodies become one
wrapping around me
mine still have not left yours
you gave me beautiful little girl
who has your eyes , your face
your hands
she is surely our love
i know you dont know me
but i have been waiting for you
my whole life i sat alone
missing you
needing you
and iam here not to lose you again
i love you .. stranger
Author notes
just the idea of meeting stranger and feeling like you know them allready everything you do you feel like you have done it somewhere . so the whole relationshiop becumes so natural and it feel like it has already been there the love shared between two people thats wat it inspired me to write this poem . the idea that love can be found even at stranger who you have never met but you know you belong with them
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Exquisite
Wow, how some of those who I have mentored seen me in the same light, it is fanstastic to see an independant term which vacates me from that realm to which wise, knowledgable and discretion have all, in abundance taken turns to accept me, except the loving back. It's a tool I feel to be loved by the sight of handsome, by the feel of thought on issues that are above many a station for someone to give a clear message throughout, leaving a less obscured matter of fact. A lovely genuine article on instant attraction as this. Well, done, the best read this month I feel for me. I adore your nature in that I sense you are caring to love those close to you in as much attempting to close the anti social behaviour gap of many.
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Beautifully expressed, thank you and good luck, Josie
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