Perching on a fallen oak
you kiss me
so soft and sweet
your hand touching me intimately
sliding slowly up my thigh
to my secret place
your hand dose not breach
just strokes along the cotton
your spear hand entwined in my hair
you kiss me more passionately.
I take the lead releasing myself from your grasp,
watching your gaze i slowly un button my summer dress
revealing only white cotton panties
I left my bra at home
you stand before me searching for my guidance
I take you hand placing it on my cheek,
you lean in to kiss me, our lips mould together perfectly,
our lips part as you remove your jumper
revealing your smooth bare chest,
you shake of your trousers
and oh my no boxers,
Our lips are locked again as we stumble to the ground
your hands searching over my naked body,
you rip the cotton from between my thighs with ease
not bothering to pull them down,
our kissing becomes more intense
our tongues are now entwined,
I can feel you, hard against my leg,
my hearts near pounding out of my chest
I climb on top cowgirl style,
you slide between my thighs effortlessly
my rhythm makes both of us moan,
my eyes focusing on yours
your eyes focusing on mine
like one we move together
enjoying every moment
every tingle, every touch
my hands laid out on your bare chest,
my hair draping in your face
your body locked with mine
you release just in time
lovers climaxing synchronised
Author notes
sorry about my spellings 
i know im not the worlds greatest at spelling.
i would be grateful -as i cant get my spell cheaker working- if you notice any mistakes to let me know, thank you
A contest entry
- For The Ladies Only (18+ Only) by Heavenly Angel.
575 points, ended November 7, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ok I'll first point out your errors, here ''your hand dose not breach'', doesn't quite make sense. Do you mean ''your hand does not reach''? or something like that. ''I take your hand...'' I think you meant there, and that's all I've noticed. Very erotic, very sensual and with awesome imagery to excite more than just the mind, if you know what I mean lol! Take care and good luck here in this contest.
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Nice! I love how you start off sensually and then you escalate away.
And the last paragraph, damn!
I started speed reading it (haha couldn't wait,) I could feel it happening - that anticipation.
Wonderful poem!
Just make sure you don't teach your son how to spell
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lol ile remember that lol
and thank you very much for reading
im realy glad you enjoyed it
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love the flow of this....
a great climax: lovers climaxing synchronised
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I did see a number of spelling errors in this piece but aside from that, this is very smoking hot!
Whew!
Geez!
Thank you for sharing and being part of the contest; it is very sensual!
Pssst,
If you truly want to know your errors, IM me
but let's just say they are there yet the piece is very well done
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Again another hot one here. I am going to have to go take care of something if I keep reading lol. I love the set up right to the point they let go together. SH
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