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What a Feeling

What is this feeling?
This feeling of loneliness and remorse.
This new kind of pain, I'm used to,
but not at the same time

No one has died, yet I mourn?
No one has done me wrong, yet,
I walk around the house like a zombie.

I feel my heart breaking,
my chest is aching.
I keep swallowing a scream of pure agony.
I keep dismissing the urges to kill myself.

I keep hidding it, but I just want it to end.
I hope it does and soon.
These feelings that I can't really explain,
but are mixture of others

Author notes

Haven't written in awhile -sigh- just how I'm feeling right now :\
But I'll be good.

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  • vampireintherain
    November 9
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    That is sooo sad makes me worry too. A part from that the poem it self it is good


  • hyper thing
    November 4
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    u better be a good little girl and not hurt yo self or i will hurt me self


    • Jazzlyn
      November 4
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      i'm fine, and stop worrying about me, I'll be fine, like always

  • I like how you phrased yourself.
    I can relate, just down for no reason?
    Hope you feel better
    Nice to here a write from you