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Butterfly Shadows

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Why do you hide in the shadows?
Spread wide your wings, let your heart sing
And come dance with me in the meadow

Why do you fear?
You'll never stray, I'll lead the way
Just follow the path, I'll be near

Have you no hope?
Drink of the sun, our life's just begun
Through time's hills and valleys we'll lope

Butterfly friend,
There poised in the shadows ,As you delicately smell wih your nose

Afraid to never be noticed in the end

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Inspired by An Old Codgers title

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  • Lee Tai Wah
    November 5
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    Like your rhyme.


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 3

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    Stunning my dear..beautiful in everway
    the rhyme and flow is awesome as well..
    you are amazing my "Beautiful Butterfly"
    Much love my friend..sss..David


  • An Old Codger gold member
    November 3

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    Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I feel so very honored that you could find inspiration for this wonderful piece in the simple words that leaked from my mind. This goes on my favs list immediately.


    • Jade.Butterfly gold member
      November 3
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      I am so glad you liked this, and I feel honored that you put it in your favs!
      I really liked that title , it seemed like it fit me so well, so therefore I wrote this
      and it just come out so easily too..
      Thank you for your kind words My friend!
      Mandi