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Land of Despair

The tears will
haunt the water
blood will drip
souls will lose hope

The light will fade into the darkness
the sun will never rise again
the moonlight would be
the fears of souls

Blood would be shed
Swords would be draw
Tears would haunt
the littlest memories

The dead would rise
the live would be in fear
sorrows haunts every memories
the tears would flood the world

Soul would hunt the living
the living would try running
away from despair
Sorrow would change fears

The Land of Despair
cruel and sorrow

Blood would make up
the ocean
bodies would make
the land of Despair

Land of Despair
the fear of the sorrows

Author notes

Yeah~... (-_-); I was writing the 6th chapter of my story and I had the Land of Despair so I thought I would make a poem about it so yeah... Ummm I'm... well I hope it's bloody (no really I hope it's not if not haunting you then it's most likely to haunt me!)

don't ask what with this okay...

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  • HugsForEveryone
    November 4

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    NICE WRITE MICH!! <3
    But what's up?!?! You're writing really sad poems lately!! Sometimes I go through phases of writing really sad, happy or funny poems, so I understand if that's your case, but if something's wrong don't hesitate to tell me!! <3
    You're becoming a better and better writer with every poem you make!! (:
    ~Carrot the Creep


    • MagicElves
      November 4
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      no I it because my 4th manga it has Land of Despair so I got bored so I wrote this poem and the other was because halloween was coming up. I won't hesitate to tell you if something wrong. (Carrot the Creep...? AHAHAHA XD!)
      ~Mich


  • TAPSCreeperBabyBird
    November 4

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    WOW! That is amazing. I really like all of the metophores put into your poem. I like how you compare the good life to the bad life. This was a truly amazing poem. Keep on writing. I can't wait to see some of your new poems and other writing that you might do.

    ~Jyllian (Baby Bird)


    • MagicElves
      November 4
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      lol but I most likely to compare the poem to light and darkness and I can't wait to see your new poems. ^^!
      ~Mich

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