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Dual Personality

My dual personality
sometimes leans on this body
like a insidious disease

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  • sxylolypop-aka dj
    November 27
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    such a strong msg in such a little piece of writeing ive read your work. great job on each! keep writeing you have bucket loads of talent!!! i look forward to more by you


    • awannabepoet
      November 27
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      Hi,

      Thank you so much for your fabulous comment, I really appreciate that.

      I will try to return the favor soon.


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    November 4

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    Disease... I see this word a lot in your work lately...

    Yes Life is diseased But we can get through it if we remind ourselves of the positive stuff... so hard to do most days though... Keep up this great penning xx DD


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 3

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    who are we? and what we are.. are like the differences sometimes in day and night.. for what we see we do not believe and live in light of the dark...for we are what we receive to be.. and you are a love with a big heart.. hugs always for you insightful words Angel♥♥

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