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Darkened Sky

Darkened sky
You steal my eyes
Twirl my moon
And hypnotize
Me and I fear
You're gonna take me away from here

I fear you're gonna take me away

Darkened sky
You're here again
Ominous, warning me
Of my Armageddon
You bring me
In sanity
To the brink
You set me free

Oh, I see the stars
I see the planets
Dancing 'round my darkened sky
(Dancing 'round my darkened sky)
I see constellations and
Other worldly passers-by
All around my darkened sky
(Dancing 'round my darkened sky)

Oh my, my darkened sky...

Author notes

A band mate sent me a demo called "Darkened Sky", these are some words I came up for it.

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  • kenny-streetcrazy
    November 18
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    Wow, this is so sweet. I love it. Beautiful in a darkly kind of way. You are an amazing writer, you know.

  • Philip Moreno
    November 4
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    Very good I really like it.


  • Green Stars
    November 4

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    Beautiful and ,to me,melancholic,which I love.You have hypnotized me with your words and I love it.The last stanza is awesome with the planets mentioned,the dancing in the darkened sky,the constellations and other-worldy passers -by...so dreamy and imaginative and shiver-creating...those words. This feels like a song to me..perfect song lyrics.The title of this drew me here and I am delighted with what I found.

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