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Family Portrait

In that Family Portrait.
                            The breath of the sea sharing its
                                                                        lovely scent with us.

 

 

 

                            Leaving foot-prints in the sand.

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Short little thing. Ugh, just random rlly.

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 16

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    lovely base to work from....
    the breath of the sea
    a rebel, gasping it's scent.

    a silent witness to
    tides of rage that
    ebb peaceful rest
    washed upon the shore
    drenched in the oceans
    tears, foam, and salted breath.
    Bathed in serenity and peace.
    It was on that day
    I decided not to drown
    but to rebel and live!

    just lines that came to my head
    for you to play with, twist, and
    piece together.

    lovely base to take wherever
    you want it to go...