foul mouthed critique
you accuse me of profanity
Yet you abuse creativity
For the sake of a few words
words that express pain
And express a humourous look at things
Yet you DQ and destroy
For you have no talent
Nor imagination
you have no right to Judge
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Those who judge are judged themselves
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Good write. I'm sure everyone can appreciate the unsettling experience of an undeserved harsh critique.
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Isn't every approval a judgment? When someone says, "Good read" it's a judgment. Do rights only extend to those who like our work? That aside, this certainly expresses a common reaction to a critic who doesn't have our respect. However I will withhold a judgment.
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oh, I like this..and how well I know the feeling behind it, having belonged to an online poetry group since 2001. Some criticism can be very cutting, insulting. I've also learned that if you don't quite get someone's piece and you misinterpret it, they can become upset, belligerent , even.
kudos on a great write!
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haha. i love it.
Far too often are our words "censored" by the general public.
this was, in one word. EPIC.
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hahahahaha very true and the bitterness behind it definetly speaks for all of us!
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Alright, I feel sour after reading this, and I think that is the point. Great write - and I loved the ending " You have not right to Judge"
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thank you, amen, amen, lol, sorry got caught up in the moment there, it was simple put one of the best reads i have read today, keep it flowing
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