To deep that all i did was bleed and bleed
Off the chart, cold hearted
Now I'm more than lonely
Asleep I still hear you lying right to me
I need something else to keep my body breathing
Would someone please just give it to me
stick me, knock me out
And let me go back to that drug induced sleep
I'll try not to cry
but i need something inside of me that wont make me break
I'm doing fine
Pretending I'm someone I'm not
I'm more than lonely
but that's all that you've given to me
I guess, I remember every shot that you gave me
Un-harmed, I'm losing weight and i cant seem to keep calm
you gave me to much
It almost stopped my heart from beating
So deep that I didn't even hear my self scream
I'm doing fine
Pretending i'm someone I'm not
I'm more than lonely
but that's all that you've given to me
something new and different, its a poem/song, please comment
Comments
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Excellent penning!
Very deep, raw emotions creating splendid imagery for an addiction...love the way you really did not tell of the addiction [per say] which is great because any addiction has the same evil Mesmerizing effects
The desperate need for the fix is present here...in addition to a high comes a low every time...the final stanza hits that "rock bottom" feeling
loneliness and despair [the addicted gift]
Bravo ....Write On!....David 
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good structure.....
a she/metal complaint....(too deep)
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wow baby, this is amazing and powerful stuff, you know just how to capture an emotion and put it into words, i love it xxx
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this is pretty nice
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