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Freezing Time

Frozen:
I look and I feel
frozen thoughts emotions
lost so long ago; wandering back
one drop in a waterfall saved for me to keep
you may go away, but I will never forget; I see you every day

Author notes

I kind of wanted to make it not obvious, and use a metaphor, but i may have overused it. I love photography. Even my mind works that way, in a sense. If anyone wants to see a few of my pictures from when I was in Florida, they can click on this link http://www.flickr.com/photos/emily_o/

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