I know of an Ed marked by the beast
He bakes unleavened bread infectiously yeast
A stunted Jesus Creased pose
In Un-Holy used panty-hose
Beware if your writing is Kitsch!
Alternate ending...
(Twixt his teeth squats a brown rose)
Author notes
Written April 14th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Erotica-Humour-Nature-Have a Look by Mrs Dazgy.
350 points, ended December 10, 2004, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I don't really understand what is going on. Ok, I just read it again and still don't get it. Maybe it's just me but whatever.
Continue writing,
Josh -
Thanks for entering my contest...well done on a good write..
Katt -
lol ..I think I like the word play best about this one ..double entendre and all
Nicely done ..ergh ..I hate saying that, but you know what I mean ..an interesting limmerick all the same 
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Wow, this limerick seems almost... intelligent? nah, limericks are pure silly.
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Or alternately again: Baked, his head we shall have for a feast.
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Or alternately: DevilEd eats only poetic quiche.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA. Or alternately: A blubber hose he holds twixt his teats.
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Lol... for whatever it's worth, and whatever it means... this is a pretty cool write....I think
Good luck in the contest.
Dee
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