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Merry- go-round

We were…..

Young lovers skimming rocks across our secret river
splashing dreams together while nervous thoughts would quiver

We tossed chills with a glance as jealous people stared
watched each others smiles explode as our feelings cheered

We were two peas in a pod, better than Bonnie and Clyde
we always reminisced on the luck of Our ride

We shared secrets like school kids and pinky swore our fears
made promises with our lips and left the past with our tears

We floated on cloud nine hundred and ninety nine
we made Love in the woods, sipped fantasies like wine

Wrapped our future with heart strings and cut out the harm
looked forward to vacations in one another’s arms

We played in each others eyes, we were one of a kind
we were best friends who always got lost in laugh lines


We were………….

            In Love
                 
                          and not one thing has changed.









                         

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  • Nickelspring gold member
    November 12

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    This is fabulous!! I loved the rhythm and rhyme and the enchanting message
    Best wishes,
    Kris


    • Layne
      November 15
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      Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words..

      Layne