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Circles

My life:

        Running
                    through
                        inside
                              on
                                  the same familiar circles
 
Every month, it's all the same

Fate's never been too kind

          I

cant.keep.these.
             
({memories wrapped up in twine})




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  • crivanea silver member
    November 3

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    first let me welcome you to AP and thank you for stopping my page second..on the poem..i like it...I see that you like to do unconventional formatting which is a great way of developing terrific free verse nice theme you got here as well...well done