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Love, am I?

Love is but a whisper,
As fluid as the wind.
In my mind I hear
The sounds,
And feel my heart quicken
In a fast languid direction
.time seems to drift away,
Stopped now and forever,
As we stare at each other.
Although hardly no time passes,
It’s like the earth
Stand’s time on end.
A rupture comes from deep within
A burning sensation inside.
Although time has stopped.
We slowly move
Towards each other’s lonely hearts.
Reaching out to be lonely no more,
He caresses my cheek,
As our lips touch.
Chaste, delicate, innocent, passionate,
All words felt inside.
It grows deeper, the feelings
In the depth of my mind
Love, so I have heard
Is what this is called.
Am I in love?
Or is it to be damned,
These feelings aside?
The kiss on my lips
Was finally gone
I felt loss of heat
Not realizing the coldness
That wasn’t truly there
On the outside.
In a lustful wish
I pulled him back
To me.
Why must he be so hot?
And I have these feelings inside?
A sound breaks,
Interrupting our lovely moment.
I look up at the board.

the teacher drawns on.

My secret love kept deep inside.

Close enough to almost touch,

but far enough to make me fuss.

Never to tell how I feel inside,

for that would cause a mess,

I must confess...

 By,
Meghan V. Wagoner
White Wolf
Tsuki no Hime

have you ever felt like this?

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  • SingForTheMartyr
    November 6
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    "Love is but a whisper,
    As fluid as the wind."

     

    Great write ^^


  • Cocaine
    November 6

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    We slowly move
    Towards each other’s lonely hearts.
    Reaching out to be lonely no more

    there lines were super good! for me it really sets the mood for the poem..
    well written and i loved it !!


  • Emo-Puppy
    November 3
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    Wow ^-^

    i like so good

  • cool :)

    Good poem.
    I liked it, and you expressed ,well in my opinion, your thoughts nicely. So, all in all, I loved it. Great job.

  • hmmm???

    this is great meghan good job chica

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