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From the mouth of babes

Feels like music is going down below
seems like it's been sold on the cheap
all the people that you meet
got thier own kind of sound
yeah, some might even call it home made
there's a poet, seems like a nice kind of guy
there's a poet, seems like he's got his own groove
Listen to these words I say
from the mouth of babes
that poet can't play the guitar
that poet can't play the bass
he can't even sing the blues
seems like he is always out of tune
yeah
look I saw monkeys flying the other day
look I heard donkeys crying
thought it was the world dying
yeah
Listen to these words I say
from the mouth of babes
I can do you one better
anytime of the day.

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  • DinkyDiver gold member
    November 4

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    hehehehe look I saw monkeys flying the other day
    look I heard donkeys crying
    thought it was the world dying
    yeah

    Loving your humour throughout this, Great work my friends xx DD


    • awannabepoet
      November 22
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      Awe, DD

      I try sometimes to be silly just so I dont always come across as morbid.

  • I don't know what to say to that. Someone smart-mouthing ya?

    and All that jazz,
    ~ Jan ~


    • awannabepoet
      November 3
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      It's all good, like I told Angel I actually encourage young kids to say that as long as they mean it of course.



  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 3

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    there is a poet who has his grove smiles on the music he knew.. sang the flavor of his song stoned strong in his heart.. we all knew he was no monkey in sight we new for in his heart he played his own tune... I love this for we all need to sing our song and play our own life in tune... awesome dear one.. always Hugs Angel♥


    • awannabepoet
      November 3
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      its all good ya know, actually I encourage the kids to say stuff like that as that will make them better at everything they undertake.


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