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The Sun,The Moon And The River

Looking at the sunset,
As I glisens over the horizon,
A aray of colors fill the sky,
it's as if god is reveling his self,
The sun peaks over the hill,
as it takes it's last look at the river,
and he says his goodbye,
the river flows evenly,
she will miss the warmth of the sun,
but she knows she will be met by the moon,
the last bit of bright color leaves the sky,
The children playing below,
say goodbye to there friends,
and head home,
for a night of rest,
the sky now is blue,
and the river greets the moon,
the moon rises gracefully,
and fills the dark world with light,
she sings her song and the night animals sing along,
as the night fades away,
so does the moon,
the her says goodbye to her friend,
as she awaits the sun,
to fill her world with light.

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