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Clockwork

Listening to a shallow beat
As if time were pressed
Spinning and spinning like clockwork.
I am still, but awake.
Within the call of a setting sun
The never-ending silence
Awoken to the falling leaves
That have rendered my memory
When the world was encased
Within my palm
And no one realizes...

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  • Roseamongweeds
    November 3

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    I'm glad that I read this poem, My favourite part was

    "Spinning and spinning like clockwork."

    I can really relate to the feeling that life is passing you by and it leaves you all alone to sort out problem that you areen't even ready to face yet.