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Whenever

Something inside me hurts
whenever I see you
and when ever I see you
my heart skips beats
and when you  have your hand in mine
I start to shiver
and when you hold me close to you
my eyes start to water
and when you stare deep into my eyes
I try but I can't take my eyes off of you
and when our lips touch in the dark of night
I feel you seeping into me
and I whisper I love you
and when I feel like having you near
I wish with all of my heart that all of that was true

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So you wanted a love poem, that's all I have for you. It's not true at all, but you really inspired me to write a love poem with your contest.

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