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Portraits that weep on the spoils of forever.

 

 

 

 

i.

 

he is paint upon her peel

and for hours

they have hung with pride

 

but inside of him

is purple,

whilst she's pale

and wearing thin.

 

 

 

 

ii.

 

she's scared

to shrug her shoulders

incase the ceiling

caves in on his lilac lies

whilst his greed

feeds thousands of mites

 

that bite muse

as moth

and bone.

 

 

 

 

iii.

 

she is his alone and never hers

 

yet she's aware

that he cracks

as she continues to lose

 

and her confusion clings

as imaginary mask,

to the task of out-wit

and pursue.

 

 

 

 

iv.

 

he blames brushes

for betrayals

and strokes for his sins,

whilst he wins

ailing affections

that shouldn't be his

 

yet he covers her hunger,

her heart

and her whims

 

with layers of love

that force her

to give in.

 

 

 

 

v.

 

she's reluctant to relate

the fate

of her frowns

and to jot-down those details

on walls wiped with woe...

 

for he's fall to her fix

and a mixture of feel,

while she's fool

to his touches, that seal her

secure.

 

 

 

 

vi.

 

so static, they sit

to spit acts of their play,

of a time when this scene

was a stage

 

and a dream

 

and while she hums

of her hurts,

consumed by clutch

of his kiss

 

he smiles wishes

through windows,

to warm

 

other lips.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • ecrivain01
    4 hours ago
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    Not bad ...

    the ending is very good. There are some excellent lines in this. I really liked "lilac lies", and the ending is superb.

    Congratulations on the Gold cup in any case.

  • LavendeRFlameS
    4 hours ago
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    This is sooo beautiful. <3
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  • SoulWhispher
    November 3

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    This is a most wonderful poem, and most impressive, it reaches deep within the soul and muse of your poetry, fantastic job, I am as always amazed, John