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If This Is Real

As far as I could see
You had your eyes on me
Can't tell if it's a dream
Can't see the reality

That maybe, just maybe
You might belong with me
Don't know the truth
Don't know the answer

Cause you look away, and then you don't
You say you will, but then you won't
Just let me know how you feel
I wanna know if this is real

It's like acting in a scene
And it's tormenting me
Cause I feel like I'm Juliet
Whose Romeo's no capulet

Cause you look away, and then you don't
You say you will, but then you won't
Just let me know how you feel
I wanna know if this is real

You're sending me mixed signs
I feel like we've just crossed the line
I'm shedding tears atop this boulder
Instead of crying on your shoulder

Cause you look away, and then you don't
You say you will, but then you won't
Just let me know how you feel
I wanna know if this is real
So I know the words, and then I don't
I'll look away, and then I won't
Just let me know how you feel
I wanna know if this is real

Now, I'm getting tired of waiting
For someone as indecisive as you
My hopes and dreams are fading
And I'm hoping that they'll all come true

Cause you look away, and then you don't
You say you will, but then you won't
Just let me know how you feel
I wanna know if this is real
So I know the words, and then I don't
I'll look away, and then I won't
Just let me know how you feel
I wanna know if this is real

As far as I could see
You had your eyes on me
Can I tell if it's a dream?
Can I see the reality?

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    November 4

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    It sucks when you have someone that won't tell you how they really feel and keep you holding on...
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy yourself on this site!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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    • Cympfonic Meledy
      November 6
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      Yea. I know what you mean; it really SUCKS!! Thanks for commenting and reading my poem.