This planet of lively beings
has been spewing,
toxins and grime
and noxious feelings;
rendering yet the subtle ether,
into a dilapidated space.
And the heavenly bodies watch muted.
Author notes
29 words.
Prompt: "the last meteor... seems a bit dim"
A contest entry
- Anything at all - Points will go up by AngelicDreams.
700 points, ended November 24, 68 entries
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Sooo true. I like the idea here.
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Thanks.
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i realllllllllllllllly like the last line
the entire poem got me kinda ..in awed...really..i didn't expect anyone to take the prompt so literally..but in this piece..I see the galaxy itself watching the meteor with me...what a beautiful piece you got here...
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Thanks so much for all kind words. It's great to know that you liked the piece. Must thank you for the excellent prompt.
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Vivid imagery and words evoke alot of thought here...Powerful piece! All the best in the contest!
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Thanks so much for your lovely comments.
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An interesting and vivid take on the prompt.
Well done! Good luck in the contest
Zach Estel.
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Thanks so much.
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