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In any case I got off

Wickedly she emoted intention
thousands of miles could not provide
So I just unzipped my imagination
& buried it between her thighs

I am certain she felt it
or she simply knows how to lie



I am not a duck.

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  • Mr. Kodak
    November 5

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    lol

    GOOD IMAGERY OF WHAT YOU WANTED US TO UNDERSTAND BUT BETTER WORDING OF IT. I THINK YOU COULD HAVE AT LEAST ADDED A LITTLE BIT TO THIS TO MAKE IT A BIT MORE INTERESTING BUT ANYWAYS GOOD JOB MAN


  • Cannonsfire
    November 4
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    lol Again you are at your wittiest best here C


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 3

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    vividly sexual;
    very nice -

    though the final line itself
    creates a speck of uncertainty -

    still stunning


  • Max Alexandersson
    November 3
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    I enjoyed this one. That's a weird and the same time intriguing photograph!!!.. HA HA...

  • aychellus gold member
    November 3
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    a vivid picture of longing for a far off lover , i enjoyed this!!!


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    November 3

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    That line about the unzipped imagination, right through the thighs, is so super-awesome! You are amazing...

    Lightsabers?

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