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My Kiss is the Kiss of All Kisses!

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My kiss is the kiss of all kisses,
No woman can bare it for long,
For it takes her away to the dreams she does dream,
In my kiss is her need to belong!

And the kiss though it be but a moment,
In its wet, and its wild, and its want,
Where two hearts they do join and to bliss in,
When you look in my eyes they will haunt,

And no other will she ever cleave to,
And no other his lips so divine,
Once kissed by my kiss it to want you,
All your need in the kiss always mine.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 5
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    A kiss any woman craves, beautifully expressed, thank you for entering and good luck, Josie


    • Keith Drew gold member
      November 8
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      Thank you for believing in my kiss.
      For the kiss is my poetry and the ink within my heart.
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  • LilyRose
    November 4

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    This is sweet soul stunning stirring all the elements of desire, need, and love like a caressing lil whirl wind coming home through the doors of dreams lost, forgotten, untold to reside forever complete...in the moment of lips entwined together.


    • Keith Drew gold member
      November 4
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      Then my lady do you dream of such a kiss? Or have you once upon a time kissed the kiss of all kisses?


      • LilyRose
        November 4
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        I relish and dream of such a kiss, close i've come... Memory fails me, so not close enough lingers.

        • Keith Drew gold member
          November 4
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          Then remind me when next I see you, that you need to be kissed!


          • LilyRose
            November 4
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            A savory whisper resplendent to cup in soft hands as still and luminous as the warmth of candle light...near such breath


  • Myjoy gold member
    November 3

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    A woman is not in love if she cannot stay long within a man passionate and rich kiss. If she cannot look within the eyes and sigh within a kiss as feel no shame, feel no guilt then there she does not belong. Lovely read. I have been told my kisses are sweet, but they do not stay long for either I do not love or they do not love. The emotion found within a kiss, of no sexual desire or need of body, but heart and 2 wear your heart on your lips, not your pants. Hard 2 find, but its out there we all have tasted it at some point and only look for another fix of sighing into eyes. Wonderfully done.


  • venus182
    November 3

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    To say that this poem is wonderful would be an understatement. I have lost all words. "My kiss is the kiss of all kisses,
    No woman can bare it for long,
    For it takes her away to the dreams she does dream" Sheer perfection.

    • Keith Drew gold member
      November 3
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      I changed the fourth line just for you.


    • Keith Drew gold member
      November 3
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      "I would rather have thirty minutes of wonderful than a lifetime of nothing special." ~ Steel Magnolias

      You see I am right about the kiss.

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