it is rainbows, black clouds
and the abandoned ark.
from life's fine waters,
it is swallowed by the gazelle,
devoured by the cheetah -
the end of something
to start anew.
Author notes
30 words.
A contest entry
- Morning Quickie VIII by crivanea.
400 points, ended November 3, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like, Good Job
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hmmm...besides the word limit..i really like this...personally i find the first two line to be outstanding..love the way you use the word..abandoned ark...and as for hte second stanza...wow..what an unique use of animals! ..fine waters of life...makes me think of lion king....and in the closing...i think of the circle of life...lol..i got disney in my head...but yes...i see much in this short piece...in another way..i also see a religious reference as well but not sure if that's where you were going
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Thanks for the comment. I edited it down to 30 words.
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lovely
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Well done, my friend.
A wonderful take on the prompt;
rather interesting, with the Serengeti imagery you have here
Good luck in the contest.
Zach Estel.
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A spiritual take on the prompt makes this a unique write...All the best in the contest!
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