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Aurora Borealis

We are the lights of aurora borealis
Our love shimmering across the night sky

The northern lights; our romance dance
Different colors as we roll around in seduction

The sky is our bed
The lights are our bodies
Passionate love, our reason for being

Author notes

Well, this is definately not my best writing. I haven't written a poem in a while and really wanted to get something out there, even if it wasn't much good. Please leave CONSTRUCTIVE criticism so that I can make this better.

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  • spiritraven
    November 15
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    Well done

    You have actually done well with the prompt. Thank you for entering my contest