the path...
everyday, i let my life flow
in an unknown direction
in search of that something
which may lead me,
guide me to that point
from where there is no start
no end but just nothingness;
where i can rest forever
and just
flow
uncontrolled, uninhibited
into myself
...is the only destination.
A contest entry
- Just be with us... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 6, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Humm...the situatuion stated is very true and very beautiful grasped as well..well done..and thanks for entering into my contest...
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Thanks a lot for your comments and the honors!!
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Existence the bane of philosophers
the right of every soul, are you not a person of faith? If we are but self, then we would be our own diety, how can that be? Even the atheist in his acknowledgment that there is no God, creates the fact that there must be, or he could not say what he is against.
Bhudda in saying the path to Nirvana is through the acknowledgment of ourselves being selfless, accepting kharma, and moving on, we dare not stagnate, but if there is no end in sight, then why not sit and wait until the path ends with us? Just musing, the poem brings much musing and conjecture.
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Thanks a lot for your nice words on my poem. Maybe you are right in saying that accepting karma and moving on is the only path to Nirvana. What surprises me is the fact that every person is so much different from others in his thoughts, in the way he lives his life, his aspirations etc. etc. Maybe he has come here to live his karma...again, just a vague thought.
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Wow...this in not only profound but like myself too,feel like I am in a bubble, one day at a time, yet floating around in my existance...excellent with thought provoking beautiful words expressed. Blessings.
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thanks a lot for your nice words!!! God Bless!!
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