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Desires

Your smile takes my breath away
and by your side I want to stay

Your touch causes my heart to race
and of your lips I want to taste

Our bodies both burn with desire
of other people we tend to tire

Your name is always on my mind
no matter who i'm with at the time

Time stops when you talk to me
you make me happy, can't you see

Maybe one day things can change
but for now, friends we will remain

Please tell me what you think

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  • ckwriter69
    November 20
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    nice write, with desire lurking just around the corner to a meaningful relationship. Keep writing.

  • hiddenfan19
    November 7

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    ok so this is amazing. i feel that i can relate to it. i now will think of this whenever i look into the eyes of the bestfriend i never had. i just hope she really knows how special she is and how much she makes me smile.

  • Simply Just Me
    November 3

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    Friends we will forever be. No mater what the world brings our way, or doesn't bring, you will always be on my mind and in my heart.

    • hiddenpoet19
      November 3
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      thanks jer..i know your always here for me although maybe not in the way you want to be..thanks