I saw my fatal suicide
Last night inside my dreams
I saw my fatal suicide
And there i was at peace
As the pills fogged up my mind
And the blood flowed from my wrist
My world went numb
And the pain - It dissolved
Drop by drop
Second by second
Breath by fading breath
I was finally going home
But then you appeared
Terror filled your face
You held me screaming
and you begged me to stay
In this cruel, cold place
I whispered my last words...
I love you,
But the pain's to much
Then i slipped away
My broken heart stopped dead
Your fear-full eyes went cold
I saw you find my letter
Written in red ink
You read it word by word
It told you to move on
It said you would be fine
But as i saw your face grow pale
I knew that i was wrong
That face it haunts me
Your composure destroyed
I think of you and it keeps me strong
Everyday i live
Every breath i breathe
It's all for you
I could never leave
Please comment and please be very honest bowt wat yu think even if it bad
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woah..
that was amazing. it had so much emotion that i just loved. i got all teary-eyed and everything. you are really good, keep on writing. -
woah...
this poem is the shit! lol it was so fucking awesome lyk no joke. keep on writin ur rlly good -
WOW!
its good so dont change it. i like it like this, good job!
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dont change it its asome i went throught something like that i tryed but my ex walked in and saved me....i hate him for it...but then i dont...he broke up with me after that...
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wow ,that is incredible,i hope its not real,as thats to much pain for anybody to handle
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