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white noise

Truth be told,
You bore me
with these inane whinings
of a small,
but bitter child.

Nothing would make me happier
than to watch
your lips  clamp shut,
capturing your hallow complaints inside.

the engine is running,
and the clock is ticking,

and I’m only here for one thing.

Author notes

foggy windows.

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  • primal-things
    November 3

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    this is excellent. I love where you took the prompt. Very creepy, but in an extemely good way.

    Best of luck.