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Hungry Eyes

Horrendously deep are your emotional eyes
understanding and empathic I realize
near perfection when they engulf me
gregariously seeing into eternity.
Reaching me at depths I did not know existed 'till now
yearning for our love to be lifelong as looking up I bow.

Entering a pool I could drown within
yes, please let this be true love to begin
ending only when we no longer have breath to inhale
sending us into an oblivion of ecstacy that will not fail.

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Hungry Eyes

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 14
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    You certainly worked beautifully with this title. A poem full of thanks and love.
    Thank you so much for your entry
    gaylene