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Give Me a Sign



How can God the Father forgive
when I cannot forgive myself?
I want to believe
Praying for a sign
Heavy heart lifted
Show me
I am forgiven

Author notes

I chose forgiveness.

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  • Leance
    November 7

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    It is often more difficult to forgive ourselves than it is for others. We tend to judge ourselves very harshly.....Well done.....thanks so much for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Leance


  • sakkthi
    November 5
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    Marvelous, simple but powerful lines.


  • VampireKitty-
    November 4

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    Gorgeous

    So simple but very sweet good job...BRAVO! keep up the good work this peice was just so beatiful...great write...I beleive that god forgives everyone for simple actions or mistakes


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 3
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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!

    I believe we all would like a definite sign on whether we are noticed by God and if he knows and forgives us.


  • Denerica
    November 3

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    It's like praying for your enemies, or even talking to them, the same goes for forgiveness. I admire your honesty that you can't forgive yourself, but you would be freed of that if you did the unthinkable and forgive the other you need to forgive, besides the real belief is God has forgiven you...wonderful cry out to ask Him to reveal just that. Excellent. Blessings.

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