How can I complete this journey
Terror sinks its fanks into my heart
and freezes my entire body
Its jaws are like unbreakable steel
The pain prior to you and I
has my body engulfed in dark shadows
Yes, you see me
but my soul will be locked away for ever
i want to love you
but I think my heart forgot how to
I want you to be the one
I want you to breathe life into my broken body
When Im alone my mind drifts away with thoughts of you
You are my peace and joy
You opened my eyes to a new beginning
Your love flows sweeter than milk and honey
Your complextion is angelic and pure
Please say youre the one
Ive never felt this way before
Because of you, Im not afraid anymore
Im ready
Im ready to love you
Would you want to recite this poem to your lover?
Comments
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a great write.. love how u single out each emotion yet expressing what is n what cud hv been... at this point i can relate to this! good job
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Thanks Man!!!
Thats good. Im glad that I write poetry that helps connect to my audience!!! I hope that situation that you speak of gets better!!!
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This is romantic. It's interesting to read a love poem after you just broke up with someone. It makes you think, at least this person found love.
Congrats.
TQOP
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Thanks!
Thanks, Its always nice to hear from you!!!1
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