Don't you hate it when you fall in love
and you think it'll last forever?
I thought we would last forever
and stand the test of time.
But we faded away like yesterday,
and there's not much more to say.
I don't love you anymore.
There's no love in my heart for you.
It'll be hard to get over you,
but I'll start anew.
Goodbye for good.
I watched life from an angle I've never seen before.
I have so much to look forward to.
I have so much to do.
I don't have any time to be thinking about you.
I have dollhouses to build.
I have books to write;
books to read.
You were only what I wanted.
Now I'm focusing on what I need.
I need Jehovah, and to obey Him always.
Sorry, but I've moved on.
I just have no feelings for you anymore.
There's no love in my heart for you.
It'll be hard to forget you,
but I'll start anew.
Goodbye for good.
It was nice to imagine us married
with 2 kids living in a house with pets.
But the dream has ended.
It's back to reality.
And I...
have no feelings for you...
We're definitely through.
It'll be hard to forget you,
but I'll be starting anew.
This is goodbye for good.
Author notes
Prompt 2 :
Love - Sad/happy/undying/beautiful/broken/ugly blah
This poem is about my ex-boyfriend.
Yes, I've moved on.
There's no love in my heart for him anymore.
I hope this inspires those who may also being breaking up with someone to move on with their lives.
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Comments
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I can relate to this, Its well written and different from what i've read before. A kind of relief in fact. Thank you for your wonderful entry
Best wishes
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This poem flows nicely with the expression of looking forward. We all can relate to this poem, for few have avoided this experience.
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I want to believe I can do the same , I'm so helpless I can't and don't want to ..
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