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Now I realize

Is this really real?
The way that I feel...

I wanna hold you and until I do...
Ill always feel blue...

Im hurt cause I let you go...
Many months ago...

I didnt realize I felt this way...
And now I realize im all alone today...

Missing you is the only thing I do...
I cant even tie my shoe...

Cause all I do is think about you
And how I want you to be my boo

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  • The Devil18
    November 18
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    wow this is so sad an really good we are all here if you need someone to talk to


  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 3

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    this is really sad and im sorry you feel like this, we all miss peopel we love and i hope things are going ok
    im here if you need to talk, welcome to AP again