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Being with you

I feel like im flying high
Waving Bye

Being with you makes my troubles disappear
As you whisper in my ear

We never do fight
We just hold eachother tight

I only love you and you only love me
People always ask how could this be

We arnt just lovers we are also best friends
Till the very ends



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  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 3

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    Aww ^_^
    i love the last few lines, amazing!
    A really great write, short and too the point
    i love it =]