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An aussie confessional

She became a nun
the same year, McCartney said to George
īt's hotter here than Liverpool"
Twenty years later, a bus became
an Aussie confessional
tootling down the
Liverpool ranges
Ever been in love?
Ringo, she said
You? I'd just left with a kiss, waving
to a an 80s Madonna holding hands
with another Bob.
An hour later,
We parted, wondering where to go...


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  • cybilseyes silver member
    November 3

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    Momentary involvement leaves lingering thoughts. Perfect thank you for taking this prompt somewhere unexpected but not so terrible abstract that I can't follow the train of thought!Thanks for the entry best of luck!
    Cyb