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She Does Not Care.(Rondelet)

She does  not care
Frustrated that is what I be
She does not care
She acts as though I am not there
Without one glance she walks by me
There's no romance, just misery
She doees not care.

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  • cybilseyes silver member
    November 3

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    Nice form! I don't often see Rondelets I can appreciate the simplicity in the pleading fury of this piece. Thank you for the entry best of luck!
    Cyb