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Abortion


  mother
  motherless child
  child
  childless mother
  how could this be?
  mother
  without child
  child
  without mother
  what has she done?
  what have I done?
  mother-
              cries



Author notes

pain of decision,

picture inspiration: http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs43/f/2009/160/2/a/The_Guilt_a_piece_on_abortion_by_Black_Nemesi.jpg

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  • michael thomas gold member
    November 12

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    very creatively constructed poetry. A well deserved congratulations.


  • Naridill
    November 12
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    This is as this does.
    I have no words.


  • VelvetWings
    November 9

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    That's really powerful *_*
    Good luck in the contest.
    ~Sparrow


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 4
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    ...

  • Rowan gold member
    November 3

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    yes, and anyone who thinks it's done without any lasting consequences is a fool.
    Very well done, mal.


  • Frogzter gold member
    November 3

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    A deeply painful, profound and disturbing decision is made. Breaks my heart. It leaves lasting scars that never fade.


  • crivanea silver member
    November 3

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    this is a different piece that what i usually read from you..emotion-wise..it was sadder...more obvious..more concrete..form wise..it was more repetitive but at the same time..the repetition acted on the subject well...beautifully ...carefully..sadly composed...


  • JinSays gold member
    November 3

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    I have no words.

    love,
    jin

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