Oh God
I am confident,
you perceive me
and if not
then witness to my fingers
You shall identify me
since,
my fingers are the rhythmic
conductors to compose my posts
supplicated to you
by handing over to you
the carols of my soul
Oh God...
A contest entry
- poems are fingers by just mercedes.
800 points, ended November 18, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
God...
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I have read the replies, and I can add only that few words that make a big message are my favorite. Compliments to you.
my fingers are the rhythmic
conductors
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This is a very beautiful communication between a man and his god. I love the idea of poems, praise being ' the carols of my soul'.
Thank you for writing for this contest. I like the illustration you used, of light. -
...noble thoughts!
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"the carols of my soul" What a beautiful interpretation of poetry. The entire piece is so lovely. It speaks to me of "who" you must be - gentle, loving, forgiving.
Excellent!
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Absolutely Beautiful
This is such an amazing inspirational poem.It touched my heart ,Jehovah God knows each of us and we are all special.He even know when a sparrow falls. A brilliant piece ,thank you for sharing.
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You once commented on my poem "Lust" and I really appreciated your words. I really enjoy your poetry, especially this one. I want to learn more about poetry and I want to continue reading your poetry as well. If ever you feel like there's something I need to learn about writing poetry, please give me your insight, because reading your work has somewhate inspired me.
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Oh my...your words here are most precious
"my fingers are the rhythmic
conductors to compose my posts
supplicated to you
by handing over to you
the carols of my soul"
This has to be one of my favorites of yours...All the best in the contest, friend!
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Prayer as poetry. Brief and to the point.
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Great write. I enjoyed reading this though it was a little short for my taste. I think it fits the contest prompt well.
Keep on writing and I will keep on reading.
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great job
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